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November 22, 2011
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Sister I cry to you, please come rescue me
Drowning myself in misery I cannot sleep
Banished to the place where I feel alone
I beg, I pled, I want to come home
I cannot lay my soul to rest
With the empty pain I feel in my chest
My color slowly turning to grey
My patience slowly fading away
I thought you loved me and cared
By telling me you would always be there
But now I see where you lacked
I thought you always had my back
My vengeance growing and turning cold
The days getting older, centuries old
If you don't love me than no one will
I'm tired of feeling sick and ill
The Luna you love is buried away
Tonight shall begin another new day
Nightmare Moon shall rise from hate
Sister dear
Save yourself
Before it's too late
Art by: :iconstarlightspark:

@Lauren Faust and Hasbro

Now then, after listening to Luna (War Remix) by Alex S., it got me in the mood to try and write a song lyric, but ended up being a poem for Luna. Luna awaits and awaits for her sister's return, with no to little hope, she cries endlessly in pain until the darkness surrounds her, eventually becoming Nightmare Moon. I hope you guys enjoy my failish writing. :3

Inspiration Song: [link]
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roses-are-pink Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
tht was deep :icontwilightclapplz:
luckygirl88 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011  Student
Daww, thanky~ :3
roses-are-pink Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
KawaiiFeather Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011
This be not a fail. It twas amazing on every level.
luckygirl88 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Student
Why thank you young sir or madam. For the traditional Canterlot poem must be upheld! For without the fun was not doubled! >/
Fewroth Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011
True! Luna deserves some love and more power! Fight for Luna! For the Lunar Reoublic (that group should get this one, its too good!) Beautiful poetry!
Fellmoon Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011
She has always had power equal to Celestia, it was not Celestia's fault ponies slept during the night. Fight for the Equestria Royalty, where the princesses continue to rule TOGETHER!
Fewroth Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011
So you fight for both princesses, when one princess obviously tryes to get more power over the other...
Fellmoon Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011
When has she ever wanted more power? Celestia wanted only to rule the day and to have her sister be close. Imagine the pain Celestia felt when she was forced to use the Elements of Harmony on Nightmare Moon, her sister inside.
Also, it is not like she planned on her sister being banished. As the show proves those that wield the Elements simply activate it's power, it is the Elements themselves that seem to decide what the effects are.
Fewroth Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2011
Yeah, i can imagine miss trollestia talking to her sister about the day and what ponies do during the day and how great it is... big sisters allways want to rule...
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