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Sister I cry to you, please come rescue me
Drowning myself in misery I cannot sleep
Banished to the place where I feel alone
I beg, I pled, I want to come home
I cannot lay my soul to rest
With the empty pain I feel in my chest
My color slowly turning to grey
My patience slowly fading away
I thought you loved me and cared
By telling me you would always be there
But now I see where you lacked
I thought you always had my back
My vengeance growing and turning cold
The days getting older, centuries old
If you don't love me than no one will
I'm tired of feeling sick and ill
The Luna you love is buried away
Tonight shall begin another new day
Nightmare Moon shall rise from hate
Sister dear
Save yourself
Before it's too late
Art by: :iconstarlightspark:

@Lauren Faust and Hasbro

Now then, after listening to Luna (War Remix) by Alex S., it got me in the mood to try and write a song lyric, but ended up being a poem for Luna. Luna awaits and awaits for her sister's return, with no to little hope, she cries endlessly in pain until the darkness surrounds her, eventually becoming Nightmare Moon. I hope you guys enjoy my failish writing. :3

Inspiration Song: [link]
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:iconroses-are-pink:
roses-are-pink Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
tht was deep :icontwilightclapplz:
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:iconluckygirl88:
luckygirl88 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011  Student
Daww, thanky~ :3
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roses-are-pink Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
np
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KawaiiFeather Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011
This be not a fail. It twas amazing on every level.
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:iconluckygirl88:
luckygirl88 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Student
Why thank you young sir or madam. For the traditional Canterlot poem must be upheld! For without the fun was not doubled! >/
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:iconfewroth:
Fewroth Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011
True! Luna deserves some love and more power! Fight for Luna! For the Lunar Reoublic (that group should get this one, its too good!) Beautiful poetry!
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:iconfellmoon:
Fellmoon Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011
She has always had power equal to Celestia, it was not Celestia's fault ponies slept during the night. Fight for the Equestria Royalty, where the princesses continue to rule TOGETHER!
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:iconfewroth:
Fewroth Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011
So you fight for both princesses, when one princess obviously tryes to get more power over the other...
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:iconfellmoon:
Fellmoon Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011
When has she ever wanted more power? Celestia wanted only to rule the day and to have her sister be close. Imagine the pain Celestia felt when she was forced to use the Elements of Harmony on Nightmare Moon, her sister inside.
Also, it is not like she planned on her sister being banished. As the show proves those that wield the Elements simply activate it's power, it is the Elements themselves that seem to decide what the effects are.
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:iconfewroth:
Fewroth Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2011
Yeah, i can imagine miss trollestia talking to her sister about the day and what ponies do during the day and how great it is... big sisters allways want to rule...
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:iconfellmoon:
Fellmoon Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012
That is your option, I disagree, but it is your option. Thw show clearly
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:iconfellmoon:
Fellmoon Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012
The show clearly shows Celestia gets tired of ruling and all the proticol.
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:iconluckygirl88:
luckygirl88 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Student
Daww. thanky you. :3
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:iconfewroth:
Fewroth Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011
Welcome... You should submit this to the new and old Lunar Republics...
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:iconluckygirl88:
luckygirl88 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Student
I can, but I need a link and or permission
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:iconfewroth:
Fewroth Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011
Look on my page at groups and youl find the New Lunar Republic amongst one of them...
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:iconluckygirl88:
luckygirl88 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Student
I submitted to them, but idk if they accepted it or not. It was a suggestion.
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:iconfewroth:
Fewroth Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011
Well, they have a lot of e-mail to answer and look through...
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:iconchoco-latte-squirrel:
choco-latte-squirrel Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Such a sad, yet touchy story.
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:iconjolteonlover134:
jolteonlover134 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011
poor luna, i feel her pain. if i were sent to the moon like that i would be her only friend on the moon.
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:iconblaquelire:
Blaquelire Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Luna, you're so lovely x3x<3
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:iconluckygirl88:
luckygirl88 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Student
Lol, she is. :3
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:iconblaquelire:
Blaquelire Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
indeed o3o
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:iconrandomfoxfan:
RandomFoxFan Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
very nice pic :3
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:iconluckygirl88:
luckygirl88 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Student
The picture isn't mine. :/ *mentioned under poem text*
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:iconrandomfoxfan:
RandomFoxFan Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
o my bad
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:iconluckygirl88:
luckygirl88 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Student
It's fine. ^_^ The actual artist is mentioned in the description. Credit given where credit is due.
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:iconheartsvenom:
heartsvenom Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011
Impressive. I, for one, could not do something as beautiful as that. Take pride in your talents for it is well earned.
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:iconluckygirl88:
luckygirl88 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Student
Why thank you my dear. :3
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:iconheartsvenom:
heartsvenom Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011
Your welcome. =D
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:iconfenwaythecat:
fenwaythecat Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011
Wow. This is amazing.
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:iconluckygirl88:
luckygirl88 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Student
Thank you. :3
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:iconmrddragon:
MRDDragon Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconsobeautifulplz: This is stunning thats true poetry~
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:iconluckygirl88:
luckygirl88 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Student
Why thank you. :3
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:iconmrddragon:
MRDDragon Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your welcome:icondragontail2:
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:iconbronyriffic:
Bronyriffic Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011
I have to admit if it wasn't for me writing a fan fic right now, I would so write one involving luna's time on the moon and what she had to go through. Really this has inspired me enough to do that. Good job my friend, the poem is really good and gives me a new realization to luna's experience. But I will stop repeating myself. I can't wait for more and now that I think about it I'm going to put a note to write a fan fic about that now. Hopefully I will go through with it. But anyways the bottom line is great poem. Real eye opener.
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:iconluckygirl88:
luckygirl88 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Student
Thank you so much. Also as fan fic writer, I realize coming up with an idea that is inspiring and catches the eye is not easy. I wrote many ouran fanfics in the past that were good or horrible. This literally was inspired by a song and from there I took on the journey of luna and thought it through. -some parts come from me in secret- But otherwise, thank you for the comment. I love seeing comments like this.
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:iconbronyriffic:
Bronyriffic Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011
Just expressing my mind my friend, thank you though! I have something to write after I'm done with my little project! ~inspiration has struck~
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:iconluckygirl88:
luckygirl88 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Student
Pfft. XD Thank my inspiration for your inspiration. XD
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:iconmartisilent:
MartiSilent Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Student Filmographer
So beautiful. :iconsobeautifulplz: Love it. :heart:
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:iconluckygirl88:
luckygirl88 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Student
Daww, thank you. :3
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:iconmartisilent:
MartiSilent Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Student Filmographer
You're welcome! ^^
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:iconprefrontalcortex:
prefrontalcortex Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Whoa, this is beautiful OuO
Such a nice poem, well done! :clap:
/fav'd
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:iconluckygirl88:
luckygirl88 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Student
Thank you. :3
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:iconprefrontalcortex:
prefrontalcortex Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem x3
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:iconkeinzantezuken:
KeinZantezuken Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011
Art belongs to *StarlightSpark
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:iconluckygirl88:
luckygirl88 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Student
thankie you. :3
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:icondonnyfate:
DonnyFate Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You might wanna ask before using someone's art, dude.
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:iconluckygirl88:
luckygirl88 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Student
Yeah...I feel bad about that. :C I rarely like ever use art like that. :C
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Aquarior Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
People will allow a lot if they are just asked in advance :nod:

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